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Just because she seems so strong doesn't mean she didn't go to sleep crying, even if you see no problems, doesn't mean she's not hiding. You might think she's happy and honest; inside she's lying and broken. She knows it's the real world and things will fall apart,  when the people you know become the people you knew,  when you can walk right past someone like they were never the biggest part of your life, she knows that everything changes.

The sun will rise and set, and she needs to remember at times like this that even when it's below the horizon, the moon is shining and it is always there when the sun goes away, that it takes a lifetime to live and a second to die, and every moment should be treasured.  We sleep until the next day, yet wake up to remember yesterday, we hold it all in our memory but sometimes it's good to forget and smile.

Sometimes she needs a hand to hold, and that's why there are spaces in between our fingers, so we can give that comfort, sometimes she just needs a hug, and that is why our arms can reach around each other and give that warmth and sometime she just wants to be alone and that is why she sits apart from the crowd, holds onto herself, because she's the best comfort she's got.
A poem I wrote because it's sometimes hard to express what you're feeling or to explain how others are feeling.
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Bsian Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student Writer
This is so accurate.

Thank you</3
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merlfoxFell Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Thank you for all of the favourites, and I'm sorry you could relate, however thank you for the compliment. :hug:
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Bsian Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student Writer
Oh goodness, it's alright.
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Don't thank me.
You're talented. ^^
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011
This is so beautiful. There is so much emotion in here that I can relate to. Especially the last line about holding onto yourself because you're the best comfort you've got. It really struck home with me.
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merlfoxFell Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011
Thank you so much, I try to right from the heart, and it's true, sometimes it's just you and you have to help yourself and thank you for the favourite :) <3
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011
You're very welcome.
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IPhantomSilver Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011
This is very beautiful
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merlfoxFell Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011
Thank you, beautiful and sad.
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FyreBurnsStrong96 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:( This is so sad and true and relatable and sad and sad and...
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merlfoxFell Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011
It is, so very sad, but I try to write from the heart and when I'm sad, that's what I write. I hope that it is a little hopeful though,because she looks after herself.

And your signature is groovy.
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